My Look and Feel assignment for Peter Moerhle's background painting class. So far this is the second pass. Critiques are welcome before I have to show it to the man himself! :]
** Updated with some tips from Jenn. Thanks again! :] If anyone has anything to add, critiques are still welcome :]
The only thing I have to say is that the pillar to the right is almost a tangent to the pillar in the far back that it's uncomfortable. I would either move the near pillar over more or just get rid of the far pillar since it's practically not in the scene.
Thanks, Jenn! I just changed it. Good call :] I moved the pillar over on the left a bit too to get rid of the tangent there. Now I'm seeing all kinds of tangents :c Haha, guess I have more work to do. Thanks again for the tip :]
This looks great! I really like the colours.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I have to say is that the pillar to the right is almost a tangent to the pillar in the far back that it's uncomfortable. I would either move the near pillar over more or just get rid of the far pillar since it's practically not in the scene.
Thanks, Jenn! I just changed it. Good call :] I moved the pillar over on the left a bit too to get rid of the tangent there. Now I'm seeing all kinds of tangents :c Haha, guess I have more work to do. Thanks again for the tip :]
ReplyDeleteVery pretty! I'm excited to see your project with all the work you put into it.
ReplyDeletegood call pushing the warm colors on the wall, they are much cleaner now! This reminds me of the thumbs in Hans Bachers "dream worlds" of Cinderella.
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